Love Poem 2.0
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Love Poem 2.0
by Darth Pyrinikon Sat Sep 01, 2012 1:00 am
I have the strength to win any race,
When I look at your beautiful face.
Baby I love you with all my heart,
It pains me the most when we are apart.
I’ve never had a girlfriend before,
But I’ve never met someone whom I adore.
Until now I’ve been too nervous to ask,
But here it is, the question at last.
It's time to see if we're meant to be,
It's time to see if you'll go out with me.
When I look at your beautiful face.
Baby I love you with all my heart,
It pains me the most when we are apart.
I’ve never had a girlfriend before,
But I’ve never met someone whom I adore.
Until now I’ve been too nervous to ask,
But here it is, the question at last.
It's time to see if we're meant to be,
It's time to see if you'll go out with me.
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Re: Love Poem 2.0
by Galvenite Tue Sep 04, 2012 8:43 pm
Nice with the rhyme's and good in the extensive words so she would understand the poem and not say "what"? i give it a 9/10 A+ great job with this poem Cam
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Re: Love Poem 2.0
by Double Impossibility Sun Sep 16, 2012 6:10 am
Nice one Cam. More than just a poem. It's visual too.
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