My love Poem

When I think of you my heart soars,
My love for you louder than a lions roar.
Because of this I know one thing is true,
It's that I am in love with you.
I can't fathom how happy I'd be,
If you ______ would go out with me.

Its still a work in progress, and im open to suggestions

Let's see...the blank could be please. Split up It's in line four. If that's it I think it's good otherwise.

The blank is for my crushes name i just decided to leave it out in case she gets on the site

Oh. Well you could always make it "generic" by puttin the please.